ANA MARIA QUINTERO


A magic and fantastic place


In a far place from the rest of the world exists a small Island where magic is the principal treasure, the population doesn't need anymore, and for a million years their life fountain is the power of tricks.


This Paradise is so wonderful, people who live there are full of happiness, there are alive for a long time, their lives are until they decide to die or when their battles so allow; the older person is 5.978 years old and he looks good because of his rejuvenation of every 10 years in the Palace of the Renaissance; It consists of climbing the mountain and attending an act of complete surrender and spiritual meditation for 6 months in which they are calm in a state of encounter with themselves and at the end of time, they are assigned vitality gifts which returns many years of life to their bodies and souls, that's when they descend renewed and full of health and wisdom.
Their power is impaired when they fight battles with the spirits from the west who want to enter their lands and take away their magic, that which makes them shine on the rest of the provinces, those spirits know it and try to rob them, but they fight for his treasure without hesitation.
Life there is bassed in love, peace, and respect, those are the principal values for their survival and everyone knows how to keep in mind and practice those.
In recent days it had been thundering and falling a lot of rain there, so they sensed that something was wrong, because the colorful rainbow of a unicorn that was always in the west, had its light colors as they had never seen; until that the night of the new year when the one million-one was celebrated, the tragedy as never before comes from this beautiful and perfect district, a thick fog fell on all the island and the horror fill every heart, that sensation was terrible and they had never felt it, for that reason they don´t know what to do, so while the horror happened, they heard a voice in theirs inside who said: “you poor generation that don´t know me, from now you are deadly and without magic, because I´m going to take what´s mine, and no one can stand before me, because you have ignored me and I can´t forgive you anymore”.
At that moment all the people fell into a dream and the sun woke up the next day, they can´t understand that situation.
But two younger guys intelligent and determined: Hugor and Figthien ran hurriedly toward the library looking for their history and the council of elders asking for the beginning and what could they do.



The council knows what was the solution, but they thought that was a story from their parents and it wasn´t true, so all: big and small ones undertook a trip through the stars and they had a meeting with their creator who only wanted from his nation an offering year by year from theirs sincere hearts: company, and a little shows of magic trick

So from that night until today, every year Hugor and Figthien guide their people to the sky for the offer before their King a sincere offering from their hearts.

And so they recognized that everything we have comes from something and we should be grateful for it.




2 comentarios:

  1. Wow ana!! your story is so awesome, full of fantasy, magic and mistery, i enjoyed your short story reminds me of the never ending history full of catch and vibrant moments.....congratulations my dear!!!

    Luisa Maria Gamba.

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  2. Hello Ana this is fantasy at its highest level. I love the relationship between feelings and the real world. Excellent topic and story line. Bye

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